Image courtesy of Lancarse & Square Enix I think one of the greatest pieces of advice that I ever received for my writing was "Show, don't tell." It sounds cliche, and maybe it is, but it's cliche for a reason. You want to paint a picture in your readers' minds without giving your story in the form of a journalistic report. That's the hope, anyway. Diofield 's directors didn't get the memo. Diofield Chronicle is about a couple of friends who find themselves embroiled in a small nations struggle to keep its independence against an encroaching empire. We've heard all this before, but that's not necessarily a bad thing. Nowadays every story has been told already in some form or another, so it's going to be impossible to get past anything's derivative nature. You just have to roll with the idea that maybe this rebel alliance's fight against the empire is unique in its own way. And it is, for the most part. The main character...